A response to the loving critic’s response to K Shanmugam

TDM, SG, Alflan, Sa'at, riling, slap, neighbour, sale, writer, poem

As you sit at home, minding your own business, your neighbour suddenly appears and slaps you.

” What the…?!” you say, more surprised than angry.

But before you can even finish your sentence, your son runs over to breathlessly defend his neighbour.

Dad, it's very clear that he's just swinging his arms because Raffles founded Singapore in 1819.

In the meantime, while you are digesting this whole series of events that support this ludicrous fantasy of an excuse, your son continues on and says:

  • I’m giving you an F in PE, since you put your face where it could be slapped;

  • I’m annoyed that you took offense at being slapped and riled up the neighbor.

I’m not a self-proclaimed writer, but I studied English Lit for 6 years (distinctions all the way), have a law degree, and used to practice law for 10 years. As a result, I think I’m capable of critically analyzing writing.

I’m not a self-proclaimed writer, but I studied English Lit for 6 years (distinctions all the way), have a law degree, and used to practice law for 10 years. As a result, I think I’m capable of critically analyzing writing.

Tun Dr Mahathir’s (“TDM”) poem says nothing about Sultan Hussein’s sale of Singapore (“SG”) to the British East India Company (“EIC”) in 1819. Absolutely nothing. Alfian Sa’at (“Alfian”) came up with this story out of thin air.

    • There’s nothing else in the poem that supports (or even hints at) this interpretation.

    • There is nothing in the poem’s present situation/context (TDM’s loss of PM-ship, Bersatu etc) that supports Alfian’s interpretation.

    • Even looking at the poet’s previous work isn’t helpful. On the contrary, TDM has a long history of taking shots at SG. I don’t remember the last time TDM talked about selling SG to the EIC.

  1. Alfian disagrees with TDM’s understanding of history after bringing up the excuse that TDM was referring to a historical event. A classic example of “ownself talk, ownself shiok”.

    • Imagine your child coming up to you with a drawing. You look at the squiggly lines and say, “That’s a pretty lousy poem you have written there”, and wax lyrical about iambic pentameter. It’s not a poem your kid brought you, it’s a drawing.

    • That’s what Alfian is doing. His criticism is not directed towards TDM at all, just a figment of his own imagination.

  2. As an example of the loss of Malay rights from the sale of land to the EIC, TDM could have used the sale of Penang island to the Kedah Sultanate in 1786.

    • TDM is entitled to choose whichever example he wants, but as a senior statesman, he knows the consequences of citing Singapore as an example over a domestic one.

    • TDM’s intentions aren’t benign, so don’t be naive.

  3. When we read what was written (whether in the original or in whatever translation we chose) did we think, “Ah, TDM clearly refers to the 1819 sale of SG by Sultan Hussein to the EIC and nothing else”?

    • Many of us read it but didn’t come to that conclusion. Instead, we wondered what TDM was doing again, and why he was stirring tensions with SG (on racial grounds!).

    • Isn’t this something we should categorically reject? Instead of making excuses for TDM. Instead of blaming Minister Shanmugam and accusing him of “riling up Singaporeans”.

Well, I'm riled up,

but not because of Minister Shanmugam’s response.

Mahathir has riled me up. Uncle, buay sian meh? You 95 liao, you’re still so hungry for power. Day and night, the race card is used to demonize Singapore. I suggest you take a break.

It riles me up when Alfian and his ilk find an angle (any angle) to criticize the G in every situation. Isn’t that a little sad? Your life should have that as one of its defining purposes. Put your time to good use, lah.

The people who continue to support Alfian rile me up. Get your eyes open. These people are slapping us liao, and this guy is justifying the slaps and saying we should not feel pain or react.

Loving critic? The clippings on my dog’s toes are more loving than he is.

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